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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:36 pm 
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Wow great chapter, I can't think of anything bad about it except of few words miss-spelled. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:42 pm 
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Danke! Could you tell me which ones? I'll fix 'em in a jiffy.

I'm very pickey about speling. :9

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:53 pm 
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I did a spell check on my PC and it didn't come up with any so I must've just not seen some letters, I'm gonna go shooting with my bro so I gotta go.

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:54 pm 
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I did a spell check on my PC and it didn't come up with any so I must've just not seen some letters, I'm gonna go shooting with my bro so I gotta go.


Ah, well thanks for trying to help me. :)

Have fun! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:10 pm 
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I loved the story as far as the storyline went, but I think that as far as writing went, it was poorly thought-out and a bit repetitive. Did you read through it again before you posted it?

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 9:16 pm 
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Oreo wrote:
I loved the story as far as the storyline went, but I think that as far as writing went, it was poorly thought-out and a bit repetitive. Did you read through it again before you posted it?


Several times actually. :\ "When I write, I go with the flow, man. You let the, like, spirit of your pen move your spirit, man." :9

Which parts do you want to critique? I'm all ears!

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:48 pm 
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It was the first mate's fault but that would hurt. ;)


Yes, it would. It's happened to me several times, mostly by teen girls and old ladies. :9

I sincerely doubt you've been bashed in the head with a multipound wood and metal firearm.

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:56 pm 
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When they get angry enough... And I've found those mean old ladies like antiques. :9

Seriously, back on topic, the next chapter of mine will be about Johannes again. :D Looking forward to Oreo's next addition, too.

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:57 pm 
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Wow....... I wish I could write this good......

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 Post subject: Re: Swashbuckle: The Sword of Islam
PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:43 pm 
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Wow....... I wish I could write this good......


Hah, thanks. Keep trying! While I'm very critical still of my own writing, I would really suck if I didn't keep trying. :)

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