“Welcome to the U.S.A. Orbital Horizons station!” the greeter bot said in it's monotone voice. “ Your room is 17E, just down this hallway,” the greeter said as he gestured to the right. I picked up my bags and made my way down to my room. I placed my thumb on the scanner, and it promptly replied “ Welcome Mr. McFriegle,” and the door opened. I stepped inside, and I liked what I saw.

The view of the heavens was spectacular, better then anything he had seen before. All of the appliances were state of the art, and there was even a personal lab for experimentation. As I opened the bedroom door to put his clothes away, I caught a whiff of something very stank. I turned around to see a lump of something emulating algae. Unexpectedly, my neck jerked backwards and I took a gasp of air. I stood up quite confused about his reaction to the substance. Soon, I began to shake, and shake violently. I collapsed on the ground and watched my blood turn green in the veins just under my skin. I screamed as horrid itching consumed me and I began to lose control over my body. Others' thoughts even began to enter my brain and my body began to warp into something unrecognizable. As I heard thousands of voices all clamoring for attention in my head, I finally sank into clarity, and stood up a changed being. I have found the purpose of my life, and I will serve it with undying loyalty.

The Conversion has begun. It will not stop till it knows all, and all know it.

It's the Flood!

Ooh, this could be interesting!

Whoa. That was creepy!

Just some CC: You switched from 1st person to 3rd person once or twice, and that turned me off a bit. Some of the past tense/present tense words were mixed in together and I didn't find that too appealing. Just something I thought I'd draw your attention to so you can work on it in the future.

The descriptiveness, on the other hand, is fantastic, and despite the aforementioned issues, I got the idea, and I like it a lot. I'll definitely be checking back here.

Thanks guys! I began to write the story in first person, but my mind switched to third person and I began to write like that. When I reread it, I noticed that and I tried to fix it, but I see that I missed a few words. I am just too used to writing in third person.