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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:12 am 
Mould Mason
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I have a large batch to show now. First of all, I will show the front view drawings.
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The New Face of the US Military 2.0 by Baylego, on Flickr
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Pray For Japan by Baylego, on Flickr
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Emotional Cupcakez by Baylego, on Flickr
Next, I have some 3/4 view drawings. This is the first time working in this view, so I would like some feedback on how I did!
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Stern Man by Baylego, on Flickr
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Russian Spy by Baylego, on Flickr

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:13 pm 
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The military guy's arms and legs are out of proportion to his body, also, people don't hold guns like that. You probably want to work on hands next.
I really like the japan kid, but people don't stand with their feet sideways.
Cupcakes are nifty, and you spelled grammar right. YAY!
'Stern Man': I want to call him Spock. He looks great, although his eyes/eyebrows look a little high on the forehead.
The Russian spy lady is more front that 3/4 I would say, and her left cheekbone is a little high I think.

So my advice: look at some pictures of people holding stuff and people standing, and practice hands and feet positioning. Nice work so far.

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:42 am 
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Nice! But just a few little things need a bit of fixing.

But overall they're really good!


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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:00 pm 
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Thanks for the C&C guys! The futuristic soldier is not one I am fond of, and I was unsure about posting it. I definitely need to work on hands, that is the one element of the human figure that I am very uncomfortable drawing.

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:56 pm 
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Cool! The best is your "Pray for Japan" in meaning and art-wise!

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
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Good works!!
I like the emo cupcakes and the pray for japan.

To help with body proportions ... look at some photos, measure sections with your pencil and then gauge your drawings with that; it will help keep proportions in line.

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
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Can't wait to see more!

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:05 am 
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Great work! I think everyone above covered what little does need some work. I really like the shading you did with the colored pencils... it can be really tricky finding the right colors to use to show the right amount of depth for shading. You pulled it off very well!

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:05 pm 
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Yeah, I like harder pencils myself.

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 Post subject: Re: Baylego's Artwork
PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 9:42 am 
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Lots more now!
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How do you guys like these?

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