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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:46 pm 
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Oh, the Kronikles was supposed to be a generic fantasy thing...

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:56 pm 
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Get him out? Okay.

Fenris finally spread the page flat. A puff of steam came from his nostrils as he grunted, puzzled. The book said but one word.

Kill.

He cocked his head to one side. It seemed simple enough. That was what he was good at.

Swish! Crack! Thud!

One swift swipe of his paw, and the Kbjolyi's skull gave way. It hit the ground.

"Simple," Fenris exhaled, shifting back into human form. He scratched the back of his head. Death was puzzling sometimes, but killing was easy.

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:03 pm 
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Oooh, nice!

Then, as he went on, he realized that the Goblins were going to his home town of Niblotezvill! Quickening the pace he knew it was time...

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:23 pm 
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At last he would be avenged for the deaths of his family and friends! He snarled with anticipation, waiting for just the right moment...

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 10:04 am 
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Pausing to catch the scent of any nearby foes, Fenris inhaled a long draught of Fall air. He relaxed a little, knowing that the journey to his hometown was a long one, and rushing would just exaust his body, leaving him easy prey for any creature of the night.

He started off North, heading to Niblotezvil, to avenge his kin's killers.

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:50 pm 
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I wanted to write that there ARE Centaurs in Ga-jonov. However they're basically animals, they can't talk at all!
There are also Dragons, these Dragons are under a spell which commands them to obey you for one year if you ask them a riddle they can't answer.

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:47 pm 
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He decided to attack! As quietly as he could, he sprinted to where the goblins were. He could now see the beady red eyes of most of the goblins. There was one pair, though, he could not make out… Fenris then realized, this was a very big mistake...

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 2:21 pm 
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As Fenris got closer, he realized that the reason he couldn't see one pair of eyes was because the creature had no eyes! Oh lovely! The Goblins are making undead Skeleton warriors! he thought. "Ashk! Dez vervolf Venriz!" The Skeleton shrieked at the top of its (nonexistent) lungs, "Hee'sh gomink! luk oot!" as one, the Goblins turned and rushed towards Fenris I'm in trouble! he thought, If only I'd got to say goodbye...

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
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Suddenly, out of nowhere, a Fimjeteiz* attacked the goblins! Fenris realized that the Fimjetiez was his friend Johalph!

*Fimjeteizi are mortal enemies of goblins and can take out one goblin every 30 seconds! These creatures can grow up to 7ft. tall and weigh (on average) 900 lbs.

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 Post subject: Re: The Kronikles of Fenris
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"Aaaaaaaa-oooooooo!" Fenris howled, "Thank you Johalph! Thank you my friend!"

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What do Fimjeteizi look like?

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