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 Post subject: Windfall
PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 10:38 am 
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A long time ago, in about the same place I am now, I started a story, illustrated with LEGO. Then I stopped. Now, about two years later, I've continued it.

I have a really weird sense of time.

Chapter 1
Part 1:
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Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9

Chapter 2
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
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Feedback is always appreciated. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:20 am 
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I remember reading these on Flickr about a year ago, and I was hooked. Now you started again! Can't wait to read some more.

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 1:27 pm 
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Thanks. :)
Part two of chapter two is up

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2011 9:00 pm 
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Sounds awesome so far, bro! Can't wait to read more of it!!

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 4:38 pm 
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Thanks man!

Updated with parts 3 & 4; replaced the placeholder photo for part 2 as well.

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2011 10:07 am 
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Part 5 up! It's longer than 3 & 4 :P

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:01 pm 
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Chapter 2, Part 6
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The commander went even paler. When he spoke again, his voice was quiet, but seething with hatred.

<I will not let you insult the Empire so. You have s->
<Sealed our own fate?> cut in the Bard in a surprisingly clear voice.
The commander stared at him with equal confusion and annoyance before attempting to reply.
<What->
<That's what you were gonna say, isn't it?>
The commander glared at him again.
Bard smirked.
<You Roman blokes are so predictable. I almost wish you weren't bloody all dead.>
The commander snarled and lost his composure completely. His dry, dead throat rasped as he yelled.
<You will pay for your BARBARISM!>


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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 9:48 pm 
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Chapter 2, Part 7
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He thrust his spear furiously point first in the join of three paving stones, spun on the stone tiles and marched back into the tomb, the two soldiers following. His spear quivered in the tiles before the still-open doors.

“Perhaps someone other should have negotiated,” mused Sven.
“Yer the main character, mang,” shrugged the Bard. Sven arched an eyebrow at him.

Silence fell again over the party.
Darkness spilled like black blood from the yawning arch. A foul breeze wheezed in and out of the tunnel like a sick man's breath. From the depths of the tomb, inventory slots could be heard clicking as the Legion equipped its gear.


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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 9:13 am 
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Chapter 2, Part 8
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Collectively, at some unspoken command, the group walked into the catacombs. Solemnly they went, and slowly, all of them feeling the oppressive aura of the ancient place. Hands gripped tight around the hafts of myriad weapons, helms were fast around brows, armour clung tightly to bodies, and still they could not but feel utterly vulnerable. Something about the awful place sapped their energy, made them feel hopeless and lost, as if they could do nothing in there except wander infinitely. Some undefinable aura just broke them, made the entire party feel as if they could do nothing to save the village, or indeed themselves.

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 Post subject: Re: Windfall
PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 2:25 pm 
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Awesomeness! It's just as awesome as before! Keep up the great work! :D

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