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 Post subject: Space City
PostPosted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:48 pm 
Furnace Scrub
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Hey guys, thought I'd do a sci fi story, here you go.

“You there, halt! Come back with the food. I said stop or I’ll shoot,” yelled the galactic guard as he chased after the street child that stole some food from a street vender. “I said stop or I’ll shoot.” “PZZD-PZZD” Was the sound his T49 space magnum sidearm made as it fired at the homeless thief, but the clever boy dodged the blasts and climbed the side of a building and disappeared into the shadows of the rooftops.

So what do you think?

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 Post subject: Re: Space City
PostPosted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:47 pm 
Chisel Hand
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I think it's pretty good!


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 Post subject: Re: Space City
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:09 am 
Mould Mason
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Good start to a story that could be interesting.

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 Post subject: Re: Space City
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:06 pm 
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Good start!

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