I trudged along the snow looking down. I was very much out of Order 260: Never be unaware. My new partner, Jock, is behind me. I realize he's screaming something so I look up and I'm face to face with an ogre. Not just any ogre, Meat, the roughest toughest ogre ever to exist. Well, don't count out Crusher. He has his axe raised high over his head. He starts to bring it down fast but I am faster. I whip out my knife and stick it in his chest. Now I know I angered him. I turn and ran screaming bloody murder.

Interesting! Are we going to see more?

This is good!

My only nit pick so far is make sure you watch your tenses. In the beginning of the story, it seems past tense: Then it changes to present tense:
Also, in this one, you used both tenses together:
Not trying to be mean and point out mistakes, just trying to help you out. Make sure that it stays either past or present, but try not intertwine them. I definitely look forward to more!

Very interesting style of writing! Keep it up!

Nice perspective and I like the idea of an ogre ... what else will be found?